[Disclaimer: Recently, I have noticed that almost every poem I’ve written in the five years that I’ve been writing has had something to do with the subject of love or its inhabitants. I’ve been trying to break this habit and write about other subject matters. As such, this poem was born. I’m well aware that it is probably pretty rough, but if you could please leave me some feedback in the comment section below I would greatly appreciate it! I would love to hone my craft and become less of a one style wonder. Thank you!]
Dark, rainy skies caressed the world for months
Soaking every glimpse of land with its morbid grasp
For the inhabitants of this world, they say it was too much.
“Give us sun!” They scream through furious showers
And so it was done
The gorgeous yellow sun arose from the hilltops
It gracefully warmed the earth with its gentle touch
But before long, it too had stayed its course.
“It’s too hot! Cool us down!” They gasp, pleading for relief
And so it was done
A sweeping gale tears its way city to city, country to country
It masterfully sucks every bit of warmth out of the sun soaked crust
Before this wind had the chance to start, they were furious
“It is now too cold!”
But the universe has stopped attempting to please
The bitter gust is here to stay
Thus was the plight of man
Always wanting more, never accepting what is given.
This could just be the journalist in me, but if be careful going back between past and present tense. Nice poem tho.
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Thank you! That is good advice, I didn’t even notice as I was writing. I’m glad you liked it!
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